100 Word Challenge

You might like to tell it from the elephant’s point of view or maybe a human looking at it. You choose!

The 100 Word Challenge is for anyone under 16. You write your story then  post it on your class blog as usual and when it has been moderated, you can then link it here using the linky below. You can link until the following Thursday.

Just to remind you that this challenge is about CREATIVE writing. When you are thinking about your piece really think about the words you are using. You only have 100 after all!

17 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by rahul&akib on March 24, 2011 at 3:14 pm

    In the crowdy zoo there was a large,beautiful elephant but he very bored he had nothing to do he sat down on the floor after a litter wile he went for a walk to hunt for food.And suddenly he saw a waterfall t

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  2. One scorching day , at the brim of dusk , at a zoo , an elephant awakes .It was sleeping next to a water fall . It was sleeping funny . It was sleeping with its trunk up , so overnight an excessive amount of water had went in its trunk . When people came in to the zoo to look at it , the elephant started shooting water at the people . That made people stop comming . Soon they wern’t getting paig enough so the buisnes played enough so the buisness had to close down .
    unfortunately I now have to end the story
    by zaman k
    age eleven

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  3. Posted by ajay/josh on March 24, 2011 at 3:15 pm

    The large,lazy elephant sat peacefully next to rattling drizzling water.All of a sudden the huge,dull,grey elephant stood up suspiciously and crinkly,rock solid footpath.After that the grey,dull elephant turned around and saw a glossy,green seaweed and started to eat the green seaweed.Suddenly the grey,dull elephant spat the seaweed like he didn’t like the taste of that awful seaweed.So the dull,grey elephant walked of spiking the seaweed and carrying on.Then the dull elephant came across to some…

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  4. As the sizzling sun rose beneath Africa. The monstrous ferocious elephant lying in the beneath the cooling waterfall. The elephant had no family and had nowhere to sleep. His family was killed by a tribe called the red indians so he find his food on his own.Sometimes he had to take on animals of prey and this is one of them.

    One day I was walking in the metallic green grass for food.Suddenly his worst enemy came and they were hyaenas. The worst thing was there was millions of them. He ran but you khow how slow elephats are so then he fort.

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  5. Posted by james/mohammed on March 24, 2011 at 3:16 pm

    The Vivid,blank sky lit up the elegant world around all of us, it was another fine,common day for the infant, compact Elephant pinky,as the weighty footsteps of Pinky came by the queer,lengthy waterfall.The waterfall
    flowed like heaven above, that’s why it was the perfect place for Pinky to her smooth,sensitive body.Suddenly there was a monstrous,heavy bang , it sounded as bad as a earthquake it was the sound of Pinkys humongous foot steps galloping through the wind to the freezing,nippy waterfall. Pinky loved this waterfall it was like her dream in the beautiful heaven

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  6. The fat,enormous elephant was doing one of biggest,best bath that all elephants elephant haven’t done for half of a day he was sitting down and thinking this is best bath any elephant can have when all the gelous,smelly ole elephants were watching the nice smelling elephant well the elephant did not care he everyone loved his lovely smell (but its the opposite).everyone loved the bid gigantic elephant because he smelled nice but the elephant thought it was normal he did not why everyone love he just thought it was him and that the best story about the elephant. THE END

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  7. Posted by sher and jordan on March 24, 2011 at 3:16 pm

    One scorching sunny day the tiny elephant was having a shower under the freezing cold water.The elephant was so hot he stood in the same place for the whole day.The next day the elephant saw another elephant right in front of him then the elephant got out of the way and the elephant saw millions of other elephant behind him.All the elephants were waiting to have a shower in the freezing cold water.So the elephant got out of the way and let the other elephant have a turn but the elephant who just cameout felt a beam of light from the very very hot sun

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  8. Posted by j and stanley on March 24, 2011 at 3:16 pm

    One scorching hot day a great blue sky flew above a great explorers bulging head as he ran across the veined jungle.He was getting chased by a herd of elephants.He ran as fast as a cheetah.The elephants stumped so loudly and hard a tree nearly crushed the explorer.Just then the explorer had a glimpse of a baby elephant.The baby was as big as dinosaur leaf and as heavy as two trucks.The baby was cute but dangerous so the explorer stayed about 15 yards away.Just before he could take another step the elephant stopped him.

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  9. Posted by Zakariya on March 24, 2011 at 3:16 pm

    It was a blistering,burning day a colossal,chubby elephant was crushed towards a pouring,scorching waterfall. There was a town near the woods where the elephant and a boy called Jack who was a exiting adventures lad who had explored the entire town. He always dreamed of going in the woods and exploring that as well but his mum said NO!

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  10. Posted by Nadia and Ramisa on March 24, 2011 at 3:17 pm

    It was a unbearably scorching day and the sky was as blue as the crystal clear ocean.It was so hot in the zoo that rose the elephant could not bear it any more so she figured out how to get out she only escaped because she had nobody to play with

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  11. The enormous elephant spitting water out.The vivid elephant was sitting on a like peachy rock the beautiful bluey-white water was dropping off the top the massive elephant name was Ellie the beautiful elephant she was very lonely she is in the grassy jungle lots of trees it was boiling she was in the 50 feet tall jungle the trunks of the trees was so long when Ellie walked forward she wicked her head of the trunks.

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  12. One scorching day , at the brim of dusk , at a zoo , an elephant awakes .It was sleeping next to a water fall . It was sleeping funny . It was sleeping with its trunk up , so overnight an excessive amount of water had went in its trunk . When people came in to the zoo to look at it , the elephant started shooting water at the people . That made people stop coming . Soon they weren’t getting paid enough so the business played enough so the business had to close down .
    unfortunately I now have to end the story
    by zaman k
    age nine

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  13. In the wide jungle. The elephant is called Emily and she is having a great watery time sitting by the big waterfall she is catching water in her nose and squirting it out. The water is very cold and it feels like it has ice in it.
    The jungle was in Africa and in that country it is very hot and the sun is shining in Emily face

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  14. As the sizzling sun rose beneath Africa. The monstrous ferocious elephant lying in the beneath the cooling waterfall. The elephant had no family and had nowhere to sleep. His family was killed by a tribe called the red indians so he find his food on his own.Sometimes he had to take on animals of prey and this is one of them.

    One day I was walking in the metallic green grass for food.Suddenly his worst enemy came and they were hyaenas. The worst thing was there was millions of them. He ran but you khow how slow elephats are so then he started to fight.He did the first pack but he had four to go. Fast, blood thirsty he ran to the tiny cave he saw and never returned.

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  15. Posted by humzah on March 25, 2011 at 9:12 am

    As the scorching, vast sun rose up, the ferocious,mammoth elephant woke up and thought
    ”where is my food”.He wasn’t actually ferocious, he was just a bit lonely inside. His family was killed by a group of brutal, hungry Red Indians who ferociously stabbed his family again and again while the poor Elephant just stood there hs mouth wide open and his trunk falling to the ground. After the brutal, hungry Red Indians had gone the poor Elephant rushed to his family and cried so, so, so, much that he created a waterfall and didn’t realize he got a swept away.

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  16. Posted by Zakariya Ullah on March 25, 2011 at 9:15 am

    It was a blistering,burning day a colossal,chubby elephant was crushed towards a pouring,scorching waterfall. There was a town near the woods where the elephant and a boy called Jack who was a exiting adventures lad who had explored the entire town. He always dreamed of going in the woods and exploring that as well but his mum said “NO”!.After that Jack was really frustrated,the he decided to go on his own so when it was sunday his mum had an interview so he set of in to the forest

    thank you for listening
    Zakaraiya U

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